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🌐 Add Japanese translation for docs/ja/docs/advanced/index.md #5043

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@wakabame wakabame commented Jun 16, 2022

Relates to #1572
This PR translates advanced/index.md.

Since 18 months have passed since the review but the PR: #2080 is still intact, the wording was changed and the PR was re-created.

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📝 Docs preview for commit 07da600 at: https://62ab57073e1dd332901e53cd--fastapi.netlify.app

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Thank you for contribution.
I upvote to recreate a PR that author does not respond for a long time.

Here are some suggestions to improve translations.

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!!! tip "豆知識"
以降のセクションは、 **必ずしも"応用編"ではありません**.

ユースケースによっては、中から解決策を見つけることができるでしょう。
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ユースケースによっては、中から解決策を見つけることができるでしょう
様々なユースケースに応じたソリューションも説明します

is this not better?

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uhhh,,, I feel it's too mean-spirited.

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I felt that "中から" made the sentence unnatural, so I modified it as follows, as long as it does not deviate too much from the original text. What do you think? cbff1ff

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I understand the meaning, but that may be because I have read both the original and the translated text many times.
To improve this, we need the opinions of other reviewers.

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The current one looks no problem to me, but would be a little straightforward to point them -> the next sections.

< ユースケースによっては、解決策を見つけることができるでしょう。
> ユースケースによっては、その中から解決策を見つけられるかもしれません。

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📝 Docs preview for commit db3c521 at: https://62ae14697e4d50290e5e9568--fastapi.netlify.app

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📝 Docs preview for commit 1958de3 at: https://62ae1705d39be72dddd492f0--fastapi.netlify.app

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@tokusumi
thank you for your comments. I have reviewed the points raised and made some changes. Could you please review them again?

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📝 Docs preview for commit cbff1ff at: https://62ae18386fa84c2d17584267--fastapi.netlify.app

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thank you for your great work!
I expect others review especially for line 12.

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Just left my humble opinion, but looks enough good!

!!! tip "豆知識"
以降のセクションは、 **必ずしも"応用編"ではありません**.

ユースケースによっては、中から解決策を見つけることができるでしょう。
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The current one looks no problem to me, but would be a little straightforward to point them -> the next sections.

< ユースケースによっては、解決策を見つけることができるでしょう。
> ユースケースによっては、その中から解決策を見つけられるかもしれません。

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@sh0nk @tokusumi
Thank you for your accurate suggestions! I fixed them

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📝 Docs preview for commit 7fbae0f at: https://62b7a171232d3456999e9af0--fastapi.netlify.app

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Awesome, thank you @wakabame! 🍰 And thanks for pointing out the other PR, so that I can close it 🤓

And thanks for the reviews @sh0nk and @tokusumi ! 🍪

@tiangolo tiangolo enabled auto-merge (squash) July 14, 2022 11:33
@tiangolo tiangolo merged commit 80cb57e into tiangolo:master Jul 14, 2022
@wakabame wakabame deleted the translation/add-japanese-doc-Advanced-index branch July 14, 2022 16:33
JeanArhancet pushed a commit to JeanArhancet/fastapi that referenced this pull request Aug 20, 2022
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