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@@ -3,26 +3,26 @@ title: Releasing Yew 0.20
 authors: [hamza] tags: [release]
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-The Yew team is happy announce a new, long overdue, version of Yew: v0.20.
+The Yew team is happy to announce a new, long overdue, version of Yew: v0.20.
 Yew is a framework for creating reliable and efficient web applications.
 
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 ## What's new
 
-This release comes with new features aimed at improving the user experience, such as server-rendering and render-as-you-fetch approch for data-fetching.
+This release comes with new features aimed at improving the user experience, such as server-rendering and render-as-you-fetch approach for data-fetching.
 
 ### SSR
 
-Yew now fully supports rendering on the server. Rendering on the server means users will get a rendered HTML and will not have to wait to be able to see anything until the entire WebAssembly bundle is downloaded and initial render has completed. With SSR, the page will be instantly visible and interactable as soon as hydration finishes.
+Yew now fully supports rendering on the server. Rendering on the server means users will get a rendered HTML and will not have to wait to be able to see anything until the entire WebAssembly bundle is downloaded and initial render has completed. With SSR, the page will be visible instantly, and interactable as soon as hydration finishes.
 
 Learn more at [Server-side rendering](/docs/advanced-topics/server-side-rendering)
 
 ### Data fetching
 
 With SSR comes new ways of data-fetching. The newly added [`use_prepared_state!`](https://api.yew.rs/next/yew/functional/macro.use_prepared_state.html) hook can be used to fetch data while rendering on the and seemlessly use it in the component.
 
-For client-side fetching, Yew now supports render-as-you-fetch approch with [Suspense](/docs/concepts/suspense).
+For client-side fetching, Yew now supports render-as-you-fetch approach with [Suspense](/docs/concepts/suspense).
 
 ## How to upgrade