contrib/internal/httptrace: code review fix

- Improve code wrt style guidelines
- Rework error checking in parseIP
- Use net.SplitHostPort instead of local function
- Minor nits

contrib/internal/httptrace/httptrace.go

@@ -10,6 +10,7 @@ package httptrace
 import (
 	"context"
 	"fmt"
+	"net"
 	"net/http"
 	"os"
 	"strconv"
@@ -96,8 +97,8 @@ func getClientIP(remoteAddr string, headers http.Header, clientIPHeader string)
 	if len(clientIPHeader) > 0 {
 		ipHeaders = []string{clientIPHeader}
 	}
-	check := func(value string) netaddr.IP {
-		for _, ipstr := range strings.Split(value, ",") {
+	check := func(s string) netaddr.IP {
+		for _, ipstr := range strings.Split(s, ",") {
 			ip := parseIP(strings.TrimSpace(ipstr))
 			if !ip.IsValid() {
 				continue
@@ -109,53 +110,40 @@ func getClientIP(remoteAddr string, headers http.Header, clientIPHeader string)
 		return netaddr.IP{}
 	}
 	for _, hdr := range ipHeaders {
-		if value := headers.Get(hdr); value != "" {
-			if ip := check(value); ip.IsValid() {
+		if v := headers.Get(hdr); v != "" {
+			if ip := check(v); ip.IsValid() {
 				return ip
 			}
 		}
 	}
-
 	if remoteIP := parseIP(remoteAddr); remoteIP.IsValid() && isGlobal(remoteIP) {
 		return remoteIP
 	}
 	return netaddr.IP{}
 }
 
 func parseIP(s string) netaddr.IP {
-	ip, err := netaddr.ParseIP(s)
-	if err != nil {
-		h, _ := splitHostPort(s)
-		ip, err = netaddr.ParseIP(h)
+	if ip, err := netaddr.ParseIP(s); err == nil {
+		return ip
 	}
-	return ip
-}
-
-func isGlobal(ip netaddr.IP) bool {
-	if ip.Is6() {
-		for _, network := range ipv6SpecialNetworks {
-			if network.Contains(ip) {
-				return false
-			}
+	if h, _, err := net.SplitHostPort(s); err == nil {
+		if ip, err := netaddr.ParseIP(h); err == nil {
+			return ip
 		}
 	}
-	//IsPrivate also checks for ipv6 ULA
-	return !ip.IsPrivate() && !ip.IsLoopback() && !ip.IsLinkLocalUnicast()
+	return netaddr.IP{}
 }
 
-// SplitHostPort splits a network address of the form `host:port` or
-// `[host]:port` into `host` and `port`.
-func splitHostPort(addr string) (host string, port string) {
-	i := strings.LastIndex(addr, "]:")
-	if i != -1 {
-		// ipv6
-		return strings.Trim(addr[:i+1], "[]"), addr[i+2:]
+func isGlobal(ip netaddr.IP) bool {
+	//IsPrivate also checks for ipv6 ULA
+	globalCheck := !ip.IsPrivate() && !ip.IsLoopback() && !ip.IsLinkLocalUnicast()
+	if !globalCheck || !ip.Is6() {
+		return globalCheck
 	}
-
-	i = strings.LastIndex(addr, ":")
-	if i == -1 {
-		// not an address with a port number
-		return addr, ""
+	for _, n := range ipv6SpecialNetworks {
+		if n.Contains(ip) {
+			return false
+		}
 	}
-	return addr[:i], addr[i+1:]
+	return globalCheck
 }

contrib/internal/httptrace/httptrace_test.go

@@ -174,7 +174,6 @@ func TestIPHeaders(t *testing.T) {
 			require.Equal(t, tc.expectedIP.String(), getClientIP(tc.remoteAddr, header, tc.userIPHeader).String())
 		})
 	}
-
 }
 
 func randIPv4() netaddr.IP {